31.03.2014
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Tourist Destinations in Samsun
Samsun is the most
developed city of the Black Sea Region in terms of education, health, industry,
trade, transportation and economy. It is also known as “The Capital City of the
Black Sea” or “Atatürk’s City”. At the same time, Samsun is a port city and it
has got a wonderful coast. Its coast is divided into two parts as east and
west. There are beaches, picnic areas and parks. In addition to these, there
are also touristic areas inherited from the past. Some of them were restored or
rebuilt making their models and were opened to visit. The Amisos Hill (Toptepe
Tumulus), the Amazon Island, Tekkeköy Caves and the Bandırma Ship are the best
known tourist destinations in Samsun.
Toptepe tumuslus is one of archaeological sits. It was discovered in 1995.
After a large-scale excavation work, that settlement belonged to the
hellenistic period appeared. There located a tomb that is thought to belong to
one of the families in the kingdom of Pontus. Additionally, Amisos treasure
found in burial vaults is exhibited at the Museum of Archaeology and
Ethnography of Samsun. The excavation works were finished in 2008 and it was
called as “the Amisos Hill”. These days, Amisos hill has been restored to serve
tourism and burial vaults is opened to visitors. They go there by telpher or
car. There is a restaurant which visitors can spend time accompanied by the
soothing seascape and the view of Amazon Island.
Amazon sculpture, Amazon water-channel, artificial ski-run, seafood
restaurants and picnic areas are located in Amazon Island by the Amisos hill. A
water park and a fitness center are planned to be build. Moreover, a village
exists by name “Amazon Village” and symbolic beewax Amazon sculptures,
pargettings and diary wares are placed in there. There are two sculptures which
are called "Anatolian Lions" on the right and the left of the Amazon
sculpture. Visitors can ride the elevator up in the sculptures to overlook
Amazon Island. At same time, these sculptures are also museums.
Tekkekoy caves was started to be digged in 1941 and was decleared as an
archaeological sit. These days, after great efforts in Tekkekoy caves for
geting them to contribute to tourism and economy, it is opened to visitors
since 2013. The past of the settlement in the caves dates back to 60000 B.C.
Mesolithic and Bronze ages' settlements are also included. Furthermore, Hittite
trail, Phrygian Castle, old Greek houses are located around the caves. The old Greek houses were opened to visitors
after the restorations. Potteries and some other wares which were found during
diggings are exhibited in these houses.
The
Bandırma Ship has got an important role in view of the birth of the Republic of
Turkey. Bandırma is a ship which carried Atatürk from Istanbul and arrived in
Samsun on May 19, 1919, the date which traditionally marks the beginning of the
Turkish Independence War. Therefore, Bandırma ship was rebuilt faithfully and
opened to visit in 2003. This museum is an outdoor museum. In the museum, the
beewax sculptures of Mustafa Kemal, his comrades in the army and the crew are
on display.
To sum up, in addition to these, there are a lot of places that should
be seen. Samsun continues to develop from the point of tourism. The number of
tourists coming to city increases year by year. The visitors are attracted by
both its historical places and its natural beauty. Additionally, the cordial
attitude of the people of Samsun is one of the best sides. Samsun which is a
developed city in terms of education, health, industry, trade, transportation
and economy is on the 17th rank in the livable cities list thanks to all these
aspects.
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