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Thesis statement: Freedom,
responsibility and future plans are the biggest differences between married life
and single life.
1. The most significant difference is freedom.
1.1. Married people have some limitation.
1.2. Single people are more independent than married people.
2. The other difference is responsibility.
2.1. People who are married have some responsibilities about their family.
2.2. People who are single have less responsibilities.
3. The last difference is future plan.
3.1. Single people think their future.
3.2. Married people think the future of their children.
Conclusion statement: Being a married person is better than being a single person, because every single person was made for somebody.
Differences between Married Life and Single Life
These days people prefer staying single to getting married because there are some differences between married life and single life. Marriage marks the beginning of a family and responsibilities but being single means you are free. So freedom, responsibility and future plans are the biggest differences between married life and single life.
The most significant difference between married and single lives is freedom. People who are married can’t be as free as they were while single. For instance, if married people want to go out with their friends, they must get permission from their partners whereas single people can go out with their friends anywhere and anytime they want. Additionally, single people have much more privacy in their life. Nobody bothers them in their homes and commands them not to be late and so on; and single people can live a free life. They can spend their time with their friends or hobbies. In contrast, married people are bothered by their partners and they have to take care of their children. So they can’t spare the time for themselves. They can’t live a free life.
The other difference is responsibility. Married people are more responsible and busier than single people. They have to manage their money or expenses economically every day. They are responsible for raising their children. Married people are also responsible to spend time with their families. In contrast, people who still remain single don’t have to look after their children or partners. Therefore, they are much less responsible than married people.
The last difference is future plan. Single people think their future. They save money and make plans but married people have to think of their future, children and their partners’ future. Generally, married people think about the future of their children. Single people can make their plans real, however.
Consequently, being single looks more comfortable than getting married. However, after a while, people who are single might feel alone while married people have a partner to share a life. In my opinion, being a married person is better than being a single person, because every single person was made for somebody.
1. The most significant difference is freedom.
1.1. Married people have some limitation.
1.2. Single people are more independent than married people.
2. The other difference is responsibility.
2.1. People who are married have some responsibilities about their family.
2.2. People who are single have less responsibilities.
3. The last difference is future plan.
3.1. Single people think their future.
3.2. Married people think the future of their children.
Conclusion statement: Being a married person is better than being a single person, because every single person was made for somebody.
Differences between Married Life and Single Life
These days people prefer staying single to getting married because there are some differences between married life and single life. Marriage marks the beginning of a family and responsibilities but being single means you are free. So freedom, responsibility and future plans are the biggest differences between married life and single life.
The most significant difference between married and single lives is freedom. People who are married can’t be as free as they were while single. For instance, if married people want to go out with their friends, they must get permission from their partners whereas single people can go out with their friends anywhere and anytime they want. Additionally, single people have much more privacy in their life. Nobody bothers them in their homes and commands them not to be late and so on; and single people can live a free life. They can spend their time with their friends or hobbies. In contrast, married people are bothered by their partners and they have to take care of their children. So they can’t spare the time for themselves. They can’t live a free life.
The other difference is responsibility. Married people are more responsible and busier than single people. They have to manage their money or expenses economically every day. They are responsible for raising their children. Married people are also responsible to spend time with their families. In contrast, people who still remain single don’t have to look after their children or partners. Therefore, they are much less responsible than married people.
The last difference is future plan. Single people think their future. They save money and make plans but married people have to think of their future, children and their partners’ future. Generally, married people think about the future of their children. Single people can make their plans real, however.
Consequently, being single looks more comfortable than getting married. However, after a while, people who are single might feel alone while married people have a partner to share a life. In my opinion, being a married person is better than being a single person, because every single person was made for somebody.
1) These days people prefer staying single( to getting married) (?)
YanıtlaSil2) (Ʌ) but being single means you are free. So freedom,
3)as free as they were (while)(del) single
4)they must get permission from their partners (Ʌ)whreas single people...
5) (prep) anywhere and (prep) anytime they want.
6) So they can’t (Ʌ) spare time for themselves.
7) They have to manage(prep) their money
8) They have to manage their money or (expenses) (sva)
9)They have to manage their money or expenses (Ʌ) (economically)(ww) every day
10) . Married people are also responsible( to spend) (R) time with their families
11) Single people think(prep) their future.
12) They save money and make plans (Ʌ) but married people have to think of their future,
13) Generally, married people think (prep) the future of their children.
14) However, after a while, people who are single might feel alone (Ʌ) while married people have a partner to share a life
1) prefer doing something to doing something else*
Sil- I prefer drinking tea to drinking coffee... (So my sentence is correct)
6) 'Spare' can be used as a verb.
7) I don't need to use prep. Manage can be used without preposition. It means to conduct, to handle.
8) 'Expense' is noun, not verb. It is also correct.
9) 'Economically' It is possible, I think
the future of their children ->you can say their children's future
YanıtlaSilSo they can’t spare time for themselves. -> WW
Which one is wrong word? If you mean 'spare time' , you can look this link '' http://www2.zargan.com/tr/page/search?Text=+spare+time&FromLanguage=&Category=0&StringType=0 ''
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